Reflections - A Dog, A Mouse, and A Cat
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| Cooper at One Year - Photo by Kathy |
The third Monday of July, I clicked my mouse and my picture popped into a small rectangle at the top of my computer screen.
DJ’s
voice greeted me. “Hi, Janet.” Her black rectangle with
Pennwriters Online Class written in white letters
briefly
occupied center screen. She’d volunteered to coordinate the online courses program for Pennwriters. She provided instructors with video programs, registered students,
recorded classes, emailed
links,
and troubleshot—a tech job I’m thankful she handled, not me.
I’d
opened over half a dozen ZOOM screens in the process of signing into
the “Make Your Characters Memorable” class each of the first two
weeks. At least this week I managed to enter on my first click.
Despite
only two students enrolling, Kathy,
the course instructor, had consented to teach the class because, she
said, “I didn’t want to disappoint anyone.” She occupied a pair
of video boxes—the
large center one for her slide show and a smaller rectangle at the
top of the screen between DJ’s and mine.
Due
to a camping trip, the other
student didn’t attend.
Kathy
whispered to herself, “How did I load the slides last time?”
Crash.
Furry tan flashes swept across the large box center screen. Cooper,
Kathy’s one-year-old German Shepherd, had joined the class.
Grabbing
Cooper’s collar, Kathy led him out of the room. She returned, let
out a long breath, and peered at her screen. “I had the slide show
right here.” She gestured to the left side of her screen. “Cooper
hit the mouse and made my slideshow disappear. Where did it go?”
Barks
echoed down her hall. Perhaps he answered her question.
DJ’s
video box
briefly
occupied center screen. “Hit refresh,” she said and named a
series of buttons at the top of the screen to select. They meant
nothing to me.
Kathy
waved her hands. “When I hit refresh, I get the old presentation
for the Road Trip in twenty seventeen. That was only forty minutes
long. I expanded this course.” Her eyebrows rose. “Did Cooper
move the file to trash?”
“I
find missing work in the recent file or in another folder.” Those
low-tech ideas worked for me, but I only had my
tabby
cat Ande
walking across my keyboard—not
a German Shepherd.
Cooper
barked another suggestion.
“Refresh
and recent are the same,” DJ said. “But Cooper could have moved
the slideshow to another folder. Why don’t you check them?”
“I
have over a hundred eighty folders. I’ll search later and use my
notes.” Kathy held up a three-ring binder.
DJ’s
black box took center screen. “I’m starting the video recorder.”
At this point she usually muted
her mic. The mute symbol didn’t light up. Did she stay with us in
case we had more problems?
At
my desk, I wrote the date and title of the course on the top of a
clean notebook page.
Eyes
focused on her binder, Kathy flipped a few pages then gazed through
her video box into mine. “Imagine my opening slide. An equilateral
triangle with balls at the points. The word ‘action’
is in the top ball. ‘Reaction’ and ‘decision’ are in the
others. Arrows connect the balls so the movement flows in a
continuous cycle.” She swirled her hand around.
I
scribbled notes.
“As
your character moves toward the goal, the cycle flows from action to
reaction to decision and back to action. We’ll focus on reaction.
Other characters are moving through the same cycle. Each reacts
differently to the same actions.”
In
her video box, Kathy flipped pages back and forth, back and forth.
“Cooper knocked the notebook on the floor this afternoon and all
the pages fell out. The sheets aren’t numbered. I didn’t take
time to reorder them because I thought I’d use the slide
presentation.”
“No
worries.” I rubbed my arthritic fingers. “I’ll have more time
to write.”
Cooper
didn’t bark. Perhaps he’d fallen asleep.
“Here
it is.” Kathy grinned and described the action-reaction cycle with
several examples. Then she said, “Check, to be sure your scenes
work.”
Mew.
“Does
the scene help or hinder the character reach the goal?”
Mew
. . . Meow.
Kathy
looked up from her notes. “Is that your cat?”
The
mew didn’t resemble any of my three
tabbies’.
But to satisfy Kathy, I got out of my chair and opened the door. No
cat in the hall. No cat in the room. “Not my cat, Kathy. Is it
yours?”
She
leaned in her chair and peered out the window beside her desk. “I
don’t see him.” Kathy continued with the lesson.
ME-OW.
I
dissolved into giggles.
Kathy
called, “DJ, is that your cat?”
Silence.
Not even a mew. DJ must have left the room with her computer like she
usually did.
Kathy
checked her notes.“It’s not just obstacles which cause
reactions.”
Meow.
“Turning
points or pivot points in the plot cause reactions.” Kathy’s
voice vibrated, stifling her laughter. “Like when a detective gets
new information or a new character joins the story.”
Mew.
Kathy
slapped both hands on her desk. “I hear a cat. The sound’s coming
through my speaker.”
I
held up open palms. “My
cats aren’t by the door and they’re not in my room.”
Meow.
“Maybe
Cooper brought us one,” I said.
“Gosh,
I hope not.” Kathy marked her place with a finger. “Soap operas
create tension. Viewers must tune in to see how characters will
react. What choices will they make when they’re pitted against
obstacles? Will they fight for their goal, or will they avoid the
situation?”
Meow.
At
the same time as Kathy said, “That’s DJ’s cat,” I connected
the meows to the black Pennwriters’ box taking center screen.
The
cat meowed louder and louder before scratching noises came through
the mic. Perhaps the cat rubbed its whiskers against the edge of DJ’s
computer.
I
jotted notes and giggled with each of the cat’s contributions. More
than once I asked Kathy to pause because the cat’s entertainment
distracted me—great
for resting my fingers and absorbing the important points of Kathy’s
presentation.
After
Kathy ended the video recording, we chatted for a few minutes. DJ’s
voice joined us.
“I’m
so sorry. I could hear your voices from the other room. I didn’t
know Kris was in here bothering you.”
“Kris
wasn’t a problem,” Kathy said.
I
agreed. The cat helped.
Kris
and Cooper provided unexpected actions. Kathy’s reactions and
decisions demonstrated a memorable character, who chose fight not
flight when problems arose.
She presented a
delightful lesson I’ll never forget.

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